Directions: Select the option that best replaces the underlined segment in the sentence.
The advocate was instructed to present her argument in a clear, concise and in a persuasive manner.
Correct Answer :
in a clear, concise, and persuasive manner
Solution :
The correct answer is "in a clear, concise, and persuasive manner".
Explanation:
1. Parallel Structure (Parallelism): When connecting items in a list or series, parallel grammatical structure should be maintained to ensure clarity, balance, and proper style.
2. Analyzing the original phrase: The underlined segment "in a clear, concise and in a persuasive manner" attempts to modify the noun "manner" using three adjectives: "clear", "concise", and "persuasive". Repeating the preposition "in a" before "persuasive" disrupts the parallel pattern and adds redundant wording.
3. Applying the correction: The single preposition phrase "in a" should govern all three parallel adjectives together. Thus, the series should simply list the adjectives separated by commas: "in a clear, concise, and persuasive manner".
Therefore, "in a clear, concise, and persuasive manner" is the grammatically correct choice.
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